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To: E. Pluribus Unum

True, but that wasn’t in Jack’s character.

I envisioned Jack as someone who was apolitical. I envisioned him as an ordinary Joe living a ho-hum life until his family was crushed by the Authoritarian Left.


6 posted on 02/16/2013 4:04:29 PM PST by Absolutely Nobama (The Doomsday Clock is at 11:59:00......tick-tock, tick-tock, tick-tock.....)
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To: Absolutely Nobama
I envisioned Jack as someone who was apolitical. I envisioned him as an ordinary Joe living a ho-hum life until his family was crushed by the Authoritarian Left.

Why would anybody want to read something so depressing?

Is your purpose to inspire people with hope, or make them want to off themselves?

9 posted on 02/16/2013 4:10:33 PM PST by E. Pluribus Unum ("Somebody has to be courageous enough to stand up to the bullies." --Dr. Ben Carson)
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To: Absolutely Nobama

Too bad Tyler couldn’t overcome the trauma of what these government hags did to him. A more satisfactory ending, for me, would be him as an adult delivering some payback, and letting them know why, not that they would get a real clue as to the error of their ways anyway.


12 posted on 02/16/2013 4:15:21 PM PST by coydog (Time to feed the pigs!)
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