While the advertising professional and I agree that your work sucks, let me add that I can see why from that post, you don’t want to reach people and it is reflected in your stickers.
Your bumper stickers were designed to make you feel better personally with some sort of angry release, not to reach the public. I really hope that not many see them, they will set us back.
I am not opposed to having my rear end handed to me publicly if I can learn from it. But you have given me nothing to improve on. Admittedly, I am venting anger. However this general “it sucks” does not help anyone. Like you, I am trying to “disturb the sheep.” My goal is to compose the perfect combination of words that will shock hypnotized people back to their senses. So how can you help? Surely your criticism is only for the first and last designs, correct?
I agree with your opinion right there. And he's getting the feedback deserved.