I disagree. It has a hit count of a little more than 4,000 which makes it pretty much a nothing. It is factually inaccurate in a couple of places, and therefore will be subject to attack on that basis. It is too long.
Some of us may regard it as a good ad because it says things we agree with, but as far as it having any useful impact on the independent voters we need to get rid of Obama, it looks like a failure to me.