1 posted on
10/17/2013 5:53:28 AM PDT by
Claud
To: Claud
I’ve given up after yesterday. I am, as the saying goes, “Letting Go and Letting God.”
I only pray my demise is swift. Obama is going to destroy this nation. He still has 3 years to do immeasurable damage.
2 posted on
10/17/2013 5:56:37 AM PDT by
rarestia
(It's time to water the Tree of Liberty.)
To: Claud
To: Claud
Season title for the last season of Breaking Bad.
Quite appropriate really.
4 posted on
10/17/2013 5:57:09 AM PDT by
cripplecreek
(REMEMBER THE RIVER RAISIN!)
To: Claud
5 posted on
10/17/2013 6:00:11 AM PDT by
wastoute
(Government cannot redistribute wealth. Government can only redistribute poverty.)
To: Jim Robinson
Good morning, Jim.
May I suggest that we have a new forum created specifically geared for the gloom and doomers?
Maybe call it “The Summer Soldier” or “The Sunshine Patriot”?
6 posted on
10/17/2013 6:02:41 AM PDT by
don-o
(Hit the FReepathon hard and fast! Nail this one for the Jimmer. Do it now!)
To: Claud
Well done!!! Obamanandias indeed! A+ for you.
10 posted on
10/17/2013 6:13:23 AM PDT by
bboop
(does not suffer fools gladly)
To: Claud
12 posted on
10/17/2013 6:23:18 AM PDT by
FroggyTheGremlim
("It is not the color of his skin, ... it is the blackness that fills his soul")
To: Claud
14 posted on
10/17/2013 6:34:02 AM PDT by
Jaxmum
To: Claud
Well done! I will never be able to hear the original without immediately remembering the words to your edition.
15 posted on
10/17/2013 6:39:59 AM PDT by
MHGinTN
(Being deceived can be cured.)
To: Claud
This is exceptionally good...
To: Claud
EXCELLENT! Very well done. Shelley would applaud the parody.
22 posted on
10/17/2013 7:04:04 AM PDT by
AnAmericanMother
(Ecce Crucem Domini, fugite partes adversae. Vicit Leo de Tribu Iuda, Radix David, Alleluia!)
To: Claud
29 posted on
10/17/2013 7:54:52 AM PDT by
woofie
To: Claud
30 posted on
10/17/2013 8:15:45 AM PDT by
sauropod
(Fat Bottomed Girl: "What difference, at this point, does it make?")
To: Claud
Thanks for that. While I never read much poetry, “Ozymandias” was my favorite growing up.
Now we need a talented artist to draw that shattered visage of FUBO lying upon the barren ground.
33 posted on
10/17/2013 12:58:59 PM PDT by
TexasRepublic
(Socialism is the gospel of envy and the religion of thieves)
To: Claud
I'm going to make a couple of (very) minor suggestions, since I'm in the writing business, and this is worth bringing to absolute perfection:
Line 5: strike the initial "And", to bring the scansion into line (since "fly-ridden" has one more beat than "wrinkled").
Line 9: substitute "teleprompt" for "teleprompter", again for scansion's sake. Alternatively, "And on the teleprompter now these words appear:" which shifts the beat to the correct foot.
Line 13: substitute "Of vanished hope and change" (or "shattered", or some other two-syllable word with the accent on 1st syllable), again to shift the beat.
- I still give it an "A+" and recommendation for honors. :-D
34 posted on
10/17/2013 5:37:41 PM PDT by
AnAmericanMother
(Ecce Crucem Domini, fugite partes adversae. Vicit Leo de Tribu Iuda, Radix David, Alleluia!)
To: Claud
Lovely prose, Claud.
It describes the Kenyan Pantload/Halfrican Queen to a T.
35 posted on
10/17/2013 5:49:08 PM PDT by
kiryandil
(turning Americans into felons, one obnoxious drunk at a time (Zero Tolerance!!!))
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