Len Downie's (WaPo Editor) Lap Dance With Drag Queen (Coverup/Dinosaur Media DeathWatch™)

The Washingtonian ^ | December 21, 2006 | Harry Jaffe

[Rembrandt_fan]

You wrote, "As opposed to the smarmy. self centered critics?"

And your pal abb wrote, "I wouldn't edit a thing in your reply..."

The word 'smarmy' should be followed by a comma, not period. 'self centered' is hyphenated; e.g.,'self-centered'.

Of course abb wouldn't edit a thing, since abb is evidently incapable of recognizing punctuation and usage errors. Further, abb's infatuation with ellipses--ending every post with them so far--is the stylistic equivalent of a facial tic, sophomoric and annoying.

And lastly, are my comments smarmy? Maybe. I do have a sarcastic streak; however, the word 'smarmy' implies a measure of unfounded criticism. Based upon the level of competence I've seen from both of you so far, my point still stands: one needs to know the basic tools of grammar, spelling, syntax, and punctuation before play-pretending print journalism.

[abb]

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[Doctor Raoul]

I don't do journalism, I'm not a traitor to my country.

[Doctor Raoul]

And lastly, are my comments smarmy? Maybe. I do have a sarcastic streak;...

Actually you're clueless with a large measure of paranoia.

Your reply #14 is pure fantasy. The Post is known for the Watergate story, which gave birth to the catch phrase used by hack journists like yourself, "It's not the crime, it's the cover up." I mocked the Post for hiding the embarassing photos. Nothing more, nothing less and certanly not the manifestation of paranoia you've provided.

[Rembrandt_fan]

You wrote, "I don't do journalism, I'm not a traitor to my country."

Those are two distinct sentences; thus, the comma after the word 'journalism' should be replaced with a period, or--if you want to indicate a closer pairing of the two disparate thoughts, a semicolon. Further, according to abb, the two of you 'qualify as editors' on this forum. Within the context of abb's statement, the term 'editors' clearly denotes a journalistic position. The second statement, 'I'm not a traitor' is the result of fallacious inductive reasoning; i.e., since all journalists are traitors, and I am not a journalist, then I am not a traitor. That all journalists are traitors would surprise many, including such luminaries as Brit Hume, Chris Wallace, Michelle Malkin, and others.

What you probably mean to say is that you don't 'do' coherent, readable writing or clear thinking.

[Doctor Raoul]

I've got your comma right here cupcake...

[Rembrandt_fan]

You've got my comma? I've got your number, sport.

Resort to long-distance insult and ad hominem attack identifies the moral and physical coward. I encounter it most with the battle-flag-waving neo-confederates and the sore-loser, faux libertarian Ayn Rand crowd. Neither types can hold their own in reasoned argument. Both are soon reduced to name-calling and invective. Hope you like the company you're keeping.

[Rembrandt_fan]

One last thing: a comma should follow the word 'here' in the sentence, "I've got your comma right here cupcake..."

Consider yourself edified, 'Doctor'.

[csvset]

Sunday “drag brunches.”

That would kill my appetite.

[Doctor Raoul]

So have long have you been laid off? Any job prospects that don't involve french fries?

[Rembrandt_fan]

You wrote, "So have long have you been laid off?"

'Have long?'

You keep writing, I'll keep laughing.

[Doctor Raoul]

As a matter of fact I will take fries with my order. You're one of the few people that look natural in a paper hat.

[Rembrandt_fan]

You wrote, "As a matter of fact I will take fries with my order."

A comma should be placed after the word 'fact' in that sentence.

As Bugs Bunny would say, 'What a maroon.'

Keep 'em coming, sport. You're becoming a source of endless entertainment.

[Doctor Raoul]

I really hate to take advantage of your OCD, but "Tag your it".

[Rembrandt_fan]

Sorry, no OCD. I do, however, know sloppy writing reflects slipshod thinking and poor judgment. If you want to be taken seriously as an editor, since you're supposedly qualified as such, then quit fooling around and learn the tools of language.

[Doctor Raoul]

Sorry, no OCD.

Sorry, but I believe you're lying.

[Rembrandt_fan]

You wrote, "Sorry, but I believe you're lying."

Again with the insults--insults lacking even a modicum of wit or originality. I'm guessing you aren't a doctor of anything. Now, what kind of person uses an honorific like 'Doctor' in a screen-name, and throws around mental health industry shorthand like 'OCD' and uses terms like 'paranoia' with no clear conception of either the condition or the mental state 'paranoia' implies?

Your grammar and syntax indicate a high school education, no more. That remark about fast food and paper hats indicates a driving need to feel superior, so you chose the service industry. When class-conscious people make deprecating remarks of this kind, they usually choose a position they consider a few rungs below their own.

I'm betting you're an orderly in a senior citizen care facility. I'd almost bet mental health clinic worker of some kind, but those positions require a certain level of competence, good judgment, and--if necessary--physical ability. Guys who revel in long-distance, anonymous insults aren't, as a rule, very physically capable, so that's ruled out.

Changing out bedpans isn't much fun, is it? And how about those sponge baths?

[Doctor Raoul]

Thanks for confirming your OCD.

I really shouldn't take advantage of that but it's fun having the power to make you reply.

[Rembrandt_fan]

You wrote, "...but it's fun having the power..."

Yeah, I bet it is--when you're bullying some poor, helpless Alzheimer's patient.

As I wrote previously: I've got your number; i.e., a very clear mental image of who you are and what you're about, and it isn't pretty.

You seem determined to get in the last word here, so by all means, get in the last word. Ordinarily, I don't take it personally when argument gets heated on this forum, but this hasn't been an argument in any real sense of the word. The word 'argument' implies reasoned debate, and there has been none of that since you never respond directly to the point; you simply fire back with crudely insulting and simpleminded nonsequiturs.

You also wrote, "I really shouldn't take advantage of that..."

Trust me, you have no advantage here, either morally or intellectually.

[Doctor Raoul]

But your last post proves I was right about your OCD.

You really should seek professional help. It's not the fault of others, it's your lack of interpersonal skills.