[Drew68]

If this were a fictional story, no Hollywood producer would accept it. He’d throw it back in your face and tell you that even the KKK wouldn’t dare make the players such obvious and extreme stereotypes.

It is funny, though. This story pretty much has all the negative stereotypes of "gangsta-thugs" present. I don't think any were left out.

[jiggyboy]

Oh yeah, don’t get me wrong, it’s funny because it’s SO extreme.

I thought the third or fourth line in the story about him needing it for a funeral was the quotable line, but that got blown away (*cough*) by the very appropriately boldfaced highlights that just drew more of a cariacture
with each sentence.

One would have no doubt whatsoever as to how the victims were dressed, how they walked into the store, what kind of car they were driving, what music was playing in that car, and at what volume, etc.