My only reservation is that it is too long and peppered with flowery language that judges, as a rule, tend to get very impatient with.
While I agree with all the points, it looks like she went overboard on the rhetoric.
I will be praying for patience from Judge Carter.
Judge Carter is a very measured, patient man and takes his time not only reading but also perusing and cogitating on what he reads.
IMO he needs just enogh to hand his hat, nothing more. He is not opposed in advance as was/is Judge Land.
Far be it for any judge to rule on style and verbage.
I read most of it in about 20 minutes... and i’m slow.