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Term paper company irks profs, students
St. Paul Pioneer Press ^ | 3/27/11 | Debra O'Connor

Posted on 03/28/2011 5:53:28 AM PDT by rhema

The college senior in Colorado felt cheated when for $23 per page she ordered a custom-written term paper from a Twin Cities company and it wasn't delivered on time.

Never mind that she was cheating by passing off a paper written by a stranger as her own. She complained to the Better Business Bureau about Essaywritingcompany.com, owned by Jordan Kavoosi of Farmington.

"I ordered it, and they were supposed to have it back to me within four days," she told the Watchdog. "I constantly emailed. Nobody replied to me. Then (Kavoosi) calls me and says under no circumstances am I going to get a refund."

It wasn't the first complaint filed against the company, which has resolved most of those registered with the Minnesota BBB.

But President and CEO Dana Badgerow calls Kavoosi an "entrepreneur who is skating on the thin edge of legality, and for sure he's plunged into what we think is unethical behavior."

The Watchdog, whose favorite part of academic life was writing term papers, asked Kavoosi if he had any problem with making a living by enabling students to commit academic misconduct that, if caught, can result in failing grades or worse.

"It doesn't bother me at all. I just see it as a business. It's as if I was selling shoes," Kavoosi said. "I just chose something that would make money ... and was kind of catchy and would help people out.

"People are too busy, and that's why we exist."

His Colorado client, who said she has disputed the credit card bill for her term paper, would agree with that.

She has used Essaywriting company.com and other such companies because, she said, "I work full time and I go to school full time and I'm a single parent. Lack of time, basically."

Dubious claims — specifically the one guaranteeing an "A" grade — prompted the BBB to go "secret-shopping." For $40, the BBB purchased a two-page paper titled "The Ethics of Advertising to Children," then took it to Dan Wackman, a professor in the University of Minnesota School of Journalism and Mass Communication who teaches the topic.

He gave it a "C."

Wackman knew that it was purchased from a company, but that didn't affect his grading, he said. He had concrete reasons to mark it down: It cited unidentified sources, it was unfocused and it failed to refer to recent dramatic changes affecting the topic.

Every class syllabus at the U is required to have a section on academic misconduct, including plagiarism and cheating, Wackman said. Each instructor denotes a consequence such as getting an "F" on the assignment or flunking the entire course.

But that's not the only bad consequence of buying a term paper, he said.

"When students skip the steps of actually doing the work, which is when the learning occurs, they're cheating themselves," he said. "That woman is cheating herself. It's her own loss."


TOPICS: Culture/Society; US: Minnesota
KEYWORDS: college; education; plagiarism; whining

1 posted on 03/28/2011 5:53:33 AM PDT by rhema
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To: rhema
She has used Essaywriting company.com and other such companies because, she said, "I work full time and I go to school full time and I'm a single parent. Lack of time, basically."

So not being able to devote the time needed to studying makes cheating OK? This person should be flunked out of school.

2 posted on 03/28/2011 5:56:29 AM PDT by pnh102 (Regarding liberalism, always attribute to malice what you think can be explained by stupidity. - Me)
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To: rhema
She has used Essaywriting company.com and other such companies because, she said, "I work full time and I go to school full time and I'm a single parent. Lack of time, basically."

Well boo-frickin-hoo. The world is supposed to bow and bend to you because life is tough? If you're not prepared to do the work necessary in order to get a degree, then stay home until you can. Degrees are supposed to reward hard work, not desire.

Jeez, grow the frick up, America!

3 posted on 03/28/2011 6:00:12 AM PDT by Badabing Badablonde (New to the internet? CLICK HERE)
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To: rhema

Its laziness. Graduate school is hard work. If you can’t discipline yourself to do original research and writing, you don’t belong there. Using a form paper deprives you of critical thinking skills. The student who does a term paper, shows that something new has been learned.

Professors know when you take someone else’s arguments and pass them off as your own, you aren’t learning. And its also shows that you have deficient ethics. Its not acceptable to crib, period.


4 posted on 03/28/2011 6:00:19 AM PDT by goldstategop (In Memory Of A Dearly Beloved Friend Who Lives In My Heart Forever)
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To: pnh102

There are plenty of tools out there now that profs use to scan papers for plagiarism, but having another person or company write it can make identification tricky.

As a student of English, I can read a person’s voice and tone through their writing, and any college professor worth their salt should be able to do the same thing. Everyone’s voice is different, and it comes through in writing. When you read someone’s work over and over again and then read something that’s being passed off as their work but isn’t, it should be plainly obvious.

This girl should flunk the class for simply talking about it. We get the academic dishonesty and plagiarism speech every semester without fail, so she cannot say that she wasn’t warned.


5 posted on 03/28/2011 6:02:24 AM PDT by rarestia (It's time to water the Tree of Liberty.)
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To: pnh102

Plagiarism and this kind of thing are two things that will get you booted out of almost any college.


6 posted on 03/28/2011 6:03:45 AM PDT by GeronL (The Right to Life came before the Right to Happiness)
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To: pnh102

It’s been a very long time since I wrote a research paper for school. More recently I have written a number of documents for my client company as they sought business process improvement or automation requirements. Just in the last few weeks I wrote a sermon for my church as the elders fill in while we are between ministers. I just cannot imagine buying somebody else’s work. I just can’t


7 posted on 03/28/2011 6:04:31 AM PDT by jimfree (In 2012 Sarah Palin will continue to have more relevant quality executive experience than B. Obama.)
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To: rarestia

Exactly. Its human nature to take the easy way out but the best things in life to come to us when we work hard for it.

When we don’t do the work, we only cheat ourselves.


8 posted on 03/28/2011 6:04:48 AM PDT by goldstategop (In Memory Of A Dearly Beloved Friend Who Lives In My Heart Forever)
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To: rhema
... she said, "I work full time and I go to school full time and I'm a single parent. Lack of time, basically."

I bet she's also going to school free on some welfare single mom give away.

9 posted on 03/28/2011 6:06:46 AM PDT by ladyvet ( I would rather have Incitatus then the asses that are in congress today.)
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To: rhema
Every class syllabus at the U is required to have a section on academic misconduct, including plagiarism and cheating, Wackman said.

Does this part of the curriculum require any essays or term papers?

10 posted on 03/28/2011 6:07:48 AM PDT by coloradan (The US has become a banana republic, except without the bananas - or the republic.)
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To: rhema

“Whoever *did* write this doesn’t know the first thing about Kurt Vonnegut!”


11 posted on 03/28/2011 6:08:51 AM PDT by dfwgator
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To: rhema

I don’t see the problem here. After all, any plagiarist can grow up and be Vice President of the United States. Just ask Joe Biden!


12 posted on 03/28/2011 6:09:04 AM PDT by sitetest (If Roe is not overturned, no unborn child will ever be protected in law.)
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To: jimfree

You can’t do because we all have a distinctive way of thinking that no one else can copy, even if we have the same beliefs. No two human beings are like in the way they think any more than two snowflakes are alike.

And after awhile you can tell when that person’s not thinking as you know how they think.

Plagiarism isn’t even sincere flattery; its outright theft of another person’s thoughts and ideas that they have a right to because they came up with them through hard work.


13 posted on 03/28/2011 6:09:49 AM PDT by goldstategop (In Memory Of A Dearly Beloved Friend Who Lives In My Heart Forever)
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To: pnh102

On an essay about ethics!?

But the problem is, these days, is that institutions are loathe to give up the $$$ they get from these students and are afraid of lawsuits, so no action gets taken.


14 posted on 03/28/2011 6:11:35 AM PDT by Gondring (Paul Revere would have been flamed as a naysayer troll and told to go back to Boston.)
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To: rarestia
As a student of English, I can read a person’s voice and tone through their writing, and any college professor worth their salt should be able to do the same thing. Everyone’s voice is different, and it comes through in writing. When you read someone’s work over and over again and then read something that’s being passed off as their work but isn’t, it should be plainly obvious.

True... I would figure that more professors would move towards having a larger chunk of the grade come from in-class exams as opposed to term papers as a means of stopping this method of cheating.

15 posted on 03/28/2011 6:13:26 AM PDT by pnh102 (Regarding liberalism, always attribute to malice what you think can be explained by stupidity. - Me)
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To: coloradan

If it does, its always clearly stated at the beginning of the course. And the hardest part isn’t the research; its giving credit to the people who made your original ideas possible in the first place. When you learn how to integrate those ideas with yours, you have made an original scholarly contribution. And whether that stands up can be verified when the reader of your paper checks up on the sources that led to your achievement.


16 posted on 03/28/2011 6:14:38 AM PDT by goldstategop (In Memory Of A Dearly Beloved Friend Who Lives In My Heart Forever)
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To: rhema; martin_fierro; Constitution Day
This is what she should have done.
17 posted on 03/28/2011 6:19:39 AM PDT by Tijeras_Slim
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To: goldstategop
Plagiarism isn’t even sincere flattery; its outright theft of another person’s thoughts and ideas that they have a right to because they came up with them through hard work.

As good a description as I've ever heard.

18 posted on 03/28/2011 6:19:58 AM PDT by jimfree (In 2012 Sarah Palin will continue to have more relevant quality executive experience than B. Obama.)
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To: rhema
The college senior in Colorado felt cheated when for $23 per page she ordered a custom-written term paper from a Twin Cities company and it wasn't delivered on time. Never mind that she was cheating by passing off a paper written by a stranger as her own. She complained to the Better Business Bureau about Essaywritingcompany.com, owned by Jordan Kavoosi of Farmington.

This is roughly akin to a bank robber suing a car manufacturer because his getaway car failed to start.

19 posted on 03/28/2011 6:21:49 AM PDT by 6SJ7 (atlasShruggedInd = TRUE)
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To: rhema

I like the woman who says because she works and has a family, she doesn’t have time to do a paper. I thought I’d heard it all. Using the same logic, why doesn’t she have someone substitute for her to take her tests. She’s too busy to study for tests and show up for the examinations. It’s only fair. (smirk)


20 posted on 03/28/2011 6:24:11 AM PDT by driftless2 (For long-term happiness, learn how to play the accordion.)
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To: pnh102

Exams don’t always provide the instructor with a comprehensive view of the student’s material understanding. Written exams would show that a student can answer a question from a text by regurgitating the text. Rote memorization was taught for a long time, and kids have learned by it but don’t develop comprehensive understanding of the subject matter through critical thinking skills whereas term papers can identify a student’s ability to form coherent ideas and give a view into the mind of the person.

I’ve been languishing in my Master’s degree studies due to health issues, and I can tell you that writing my thesis has become one of the most difficult endeavors I’ve undertaken; however, I’ve never considered cheating or having someone else write it for me. I want this piece to be demonstrative of my ability to think critically, impart new ideas, and add to the existing literature in my field of expertise.

To cheat on a term paper just to pass and get the piece of paper only demonstrates that you’re of questionable moral character and will eventually come back to bite you in the ass. How many examples are there out there of students caught years down the road? Why bother with the constant worry. If you can’t handle the workload, perhaps that course of education isn’t for you.


21 posted on 03/28/2011 6:24:52 AM PDT by rarestia (It's time to water the Tree of Liberty.)
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To: GeronL
Plagiarism and this kind of thing are two things that will get you booted out of almost any college.

In what country? Not in America.

22 posted on 03/28/2011 6:26:29 AM PDT by Gondring (Paul Revere would have been flamed as a naysayer troll and told to go back to Boston.)
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To: rhema
If a person is having problems producing quality written work, the answer is not plagiarism. The answer is to write your own work, and have somebody edit/proofread it for you.
23 posted on 03/28/2011 6:52:50 AM PDT by Titus Quinctius Cincinnatus (What if God doesn't want the Gospel rescued from the fundamentalists?)
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To: rhema

You know, if this company had been around 25 years ago and selling political speeches, Dopey Joe Biden might have been able to plagiarize his political speeches without being so blatant about it. He might have even been able to get the democrat nomination for POTUS or VP without having to be Zero’s little lapdog.


24 posted on 03/28/2011 6:57:31 AM PDT by VRWCmember (Veritas vos Liberabit)
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To: rhema

I have no sympathy for that lazy, cheating student.


25 posted on 03/28/2011 6:58:55 AM PDT by Redleg Duke ("Madison, Wisconsin is 30 square miles surrounded by reality.", L. S. Dryfus)
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To: GeronL
"Plagiarism and this kind of thing are two things that will get you booted out of almost any college."

But, you can still be Vice President of the United States under the "first post-racial president".

26 posted on 03/28/2011 7:01:00 AM PDT by Redleg Duke ("Madison, Wisconsin is 30 square miles surrounded by reality.", L. S. Dryfus)
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To: rhema

As a teacher, I’m not too wound up about cheating.

In my programming classes, cheating is almost as hard as the work itself. Sneak one by me, and it’s just that much longer and that much more money before you slam into the brick wall of ignorance. The piece of paper at the end (if you get that far) won’t help you do the actual work in the real world. If you’re doing so badly you need to cheat, the difference between what I know you know vs what you hand in will be obvious. If you hand in another student’s work, I’ll notice that it’s the same, right down to the misspellings, erratic punctuation, and unique mistakes - even if you replace names and rearrange the content. Cheat, you get a zero; learn your lesson and do your work and I’ll overlook it; lie to me again and you’re out (which in irony won’t be my call because you’ve already failed yourself).

If you cheat in school, just leave already. It’s way too expensive to come out having not learned.

Have I passed known cheaters? Yes. Sometimes it’s not worth my effort to flunk them. I’m not worried, because they will suffer the consequences: you cannot survive the next course if you do not grasp the prerequisite material; there comes a point where you won’t even know enough about this complex subject matter to cheat effectively (and if you were smart enough to, you didn’t need to). By the time you get mired in your own deception-fueled ignorance, you’ll have committed to spending tens of thousands of dollars with nothing to show for it. You reap what you sow. Karma (as a natural phenomenon, not obtuse mysticism) happens.

Oh, BTW: on the final exam, don’t buy the answers on-line. I know. Save your money, you’ll need it.


27 posted on 03/28/2011 7:05:19 AM PDT by ctdonath2 (Great children's books - http://www.UsborneBooksGA.com)
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To: Gondring

really?

I thought for sure these were still booting offenses.


28 posted on 03/28/2011 7:08:58 AM PDT by GeronL (The Right to Life came before the Right to Happiness)
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To: goldstategop

I was just wondering whether there would be an opportunity to buy canned essays for this class.


29 posted on 03/28/2011 7:22:51 AM PDT by coloradan (The US has become a banana republic, except without the bananas - or the republic.)
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To: Tijeras_Slim

Yeah, that worked well . . .


30 posted on 03/28/2011 7:32:28 AM PDT by BraveMan
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To: rhema

All of these comments were plagiarized from me.


31 posted on 03/28/2011 8:10:06 AM PDT by blueunicorn6 ("A crack shot and a good dancer")
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To: ctdonath2
In my programming classes, cheating is almost as hard as the work itself.

You're only fooling yourself. I've observed cabals of cheaters from programming classes. Bright but too social. They pooled their resources while individual classmates followed the rules and were left to drown. It's far harder for an individual to compete against a group. The collective skill of the cabal skewed the apparent progress of the class. It was a bubble. Leaders of a cabal mastered the art of schmoozing professors and engaged in a charm offensive which deflected scrutiny.

32 posted on 03/28/2011 11:38:26 AM PDT by newzjunkey (Obama: nobel peace prize winner, warmonger, golfer)
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To: rhema
Wackman knew that it was purchased from a company, but that didn't affect his grading, he said. He had concrete reasons to mark it down...

As the phrase goes, "I was born at night but not last night."

There's a reason double-blind testing is a pillar of scientific rigor. He knew it was purchased making him tainted. His grading is rendered meaningless by the foreknowledge. His "concrete reasons" are irrelevant.

33 posted on 03/28/2011 11:45:39 AM PDT by newzjunkey (Obama: nobel peace prize winner, warmonger, golfer)
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To: newzjunkey

I don’t mind people studying together to learn. Question is whether they submit their own work. Don’t do the work, don’t pass. Hand in something identical to someone else and it’s obvious. There is no “compete against the group” as there is no curve. Schmooze all you like, everyone will get the same treatment.

As I noted, even if you do cheat and do pass you’ll still fail in the long run, at very high cost. I’m not worried.


34 posted on 03/28/2011 11:53:35 AM PDT by ctdonath2 (Great children's books - http://www.UsborneBooksGA.com)
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To: ctdonath2

What I would do with group projects is after it is turned in, I’d have a one-on-one with each team member asking them specifically what their contribution was, and ask certain questions about what was turned in that could only be answered had they actively worked on it. If they don’t answer satisfactorily, they fail.


35 posted on 03/28/2011 11:55:48 AM PDT by dfwgator
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To: newzjunkey

Not if there is objective error.

If the question was “What is 2+2=?” and you KNOW the answer was purchased (say, because the submission includes the URL TestAnswersFor25Bucks.com/What_is_2+2=?), if the answer is 3 then regardless of obvious bias you can still give an objective grade of 0 for concrete reasons.

(Not joking about the URL.)


36 posted on 03/28/2011 12:10:39 PM PDT by ctdonath2 (Great children's books - http://www.UsborneBooksGA.com)
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To: dfwgator

I’m not talking about group projects.


37 posted on 03/28/2011 12:12:21 PM PDT by ctdonath2 (Great children's books - http://www.UsborneBooksGA.com)
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To: GeronL

On the books? Yes.
In reality? No.


38 posted on 03/28/2011 1:24:13 PM PDT by Gondring (Paul Revere would have been flamed as a naysayer troll and told to go back to Boston.)
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