This could be very effective if it were distilled to something clear, concise, short, and readable.
Sorry, I stated the facts. I don’t claim to be a world class writer, just a BRUTALLY HONEST American who is sick of the nonsense and willing to stand against it. If it is poorly written or difficult to read, I suppose I’d say, (no offense) but my intent was not to write a best seller. The truth is often disjointed and confusing, often, that is how you can tell it is the truth. PP~