You understand that as a writer, you subject yourself to criticism - allow me to criticize. The first couple of paragraphs are so full of falsehoods, logical fallacies, and inane misunderstandings that I couldn't get any further. Here are two pieces of advice - don't try to write about things of which you obviously know nothing, and find a new hobby, preferably one you won't feel compelled to share with other. Thanks.
posted on 01/26/2013 9:21:31 AM PST
Try again without the thug tactic.
Pray for America
posted on 01/26/2013 9:28:18 AM PST
(Welcome to Obamaville)
Your statements are not necessarily correct. However, they are rude and infantile. Perhaps you should not try to critique anyone else’s writings until you learn some manners.
posted on 01/26/2013 12:14:39 PM PST
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