I’m hardly an expert, but his analysis seems damning. Especially the border - which he’s right on. They are clearly rectangles drawn in a graphics program and only crudely put together.
“What is readily apparent is that the top and bottom horizontal border bars are overlapped by the top and bottom edges of two vertical rectangles.”
I agree. I work in PS and there are a lots of bad areas that could lead one to think it is not a copy of the original but created on a computer.
Plus everything’s in uppercase except DATES.
Hey, it's a bunch of HI state bureaucrats, OK?
A wonder it would be if it were perfect!