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Jefferson changed 'subjects' to 'citizens' in Declaration of Independence
The Washington Post ^ | July 3, 2010 | Marc Kaufman

Posted on 07/03/2010 8:39:18 AM PDT by An Old Man

"Subjects."

That's what Thomas Jefferson first wrote in an early draft of the Declaration of Independence to describe the people of the 13 colonies.

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But in a moment when history took a sharp turn, Jefferson sought quite methodically to expunge the word, to wipe it out of existence and write over it. Many words were crossed out and replaced in the draft, but only one was obliterated.

Over the smudge, Jefferson then wrote the word "citizens."

(Excerpt) Read more at washingtonpost.com ...


TOPICS: Constitution/Conservatism; Culture/Society; Government; News/Current Events
KEYWORDS: declaration; fortunes; lives; sacredhonor
With the magic Negro in charge we may be going back to the original word.

Read the artilce and decider for yourself which word you prefer.

1 posted on 07/03/2010 8:39:21 AM PDT by An Old Man
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To: An Old Man

Idiom of the time. Words had more meaning back then.


2 posted on 07/03/2010 8:40:44 AM PDT by Dallas59 (President Robert Gibbs 2009-2013)
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To: An Old Man
I'd say Jefferson changed subjects into citizens via the Declaration of Independence (plus the blood, toil, sweat and tears of the patriots).
3 posted on 07/03/2010 8:42:53 AM PDT by Fabozz
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To: An Old Man

I’m good with “citizen”.


4 posted on 07/03/2010 8:45:01 AM PDT by cripplecreek (Remember the River Raisin! (look it up))
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To: Fabozz
Subjects would be referring to those presently under British rule. It was the terminolgy of the day.

The word citizens meant those who had given their allegiance to this particular fight for self rule. He was actually speaking for a lot of folks who hadn't seen the light yet.

I wouldn't get to caught up in this "obliterated" thing. Jefferson has a pretty crappy hand if I remember correctly.

And then there's his copy machine...

Of course, this is all IMHO.

5 posted on 07/03/2010 8:51:45 AM PDT by Sacajaweau (What)
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To: An Old Man

“Jefferson changed ‘subjects’ to ‘citizens’ in Declaration of Independence”

He was thinking about King George...and Barack Obama.


6 posted on 07/03/2010 8:52:08 AM PDT by Spok (Free Range Republican)
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To: An Old Man
Thomas Jefferson made slip in Declaration (not slip, a decision)

Be prepared for Jefferson haters. I had one.

7 posted on 07/03/2010 8:57:04 AM PDT by DJ MacWoW (If Bam is the answer, the question was stupid.)
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To: An Old Man

You beat me to it. I was going to say Obama wants to change it back again.


8 posted on 07/03/2010 9:14:38 AM PDT by Fantasywriter
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To: DJ MacWoW
I think I spoke to soon...Perhaps the better definition of what Jefferson was trying to say can be explained by the early definition of Roman Citizenship....voters, land ownership, generally excludes women.....

It wasn't a slip...it was to become the future definition in our constitution. Betcha Madison caught it....

9 posted on 07/03/2010 9:32:39 AM PDT by Sacajaweau (What)
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To: Sacajaweau

I think it is simply the difference between those that are ruled and those that are self-governing.


10 posted on 07/03/2010 9:39:51 AM PDT by DJ MacWoW (If Bam is the answer, the question was stupid.)
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To: Fantasywriter

Don’t forget, Obama believes citizenship is a matter of faith now. If he deems you not to have enough faith, you might not be a citizen anymore.

/no sarc


11 posted on 07/03/2010 9:41:52 AM PDT by Secret Agent Man (I'd like to tell you, but then I'd have to kill you.)
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To: An Old Man
We must remember that the Colonists were seen by King George as "subjects": subject to excessive taxation of the fruits of their own labors. Any Declaration of Independence from that oppression must, by its own definition, reject the idea of subjection. Whether or not technology makes it possible to "see" such an erasure, common sense makes it a likely possibility.

Edumund Burke in his "Speech on Conciliation," reminded the British Parliament of the oppressive nature of taxation to people who valued liberty:

"Liberty inheres in some sensible object; and every nation has formed to itself some favorite point, which by way of eminence becomes the criterion of their happiness. It happened, you know, Sir, that the great contests [Footnote: 24] for freedom in this country were from the earliest times chiefly upon the question of taxing. Most of the contests in the ancient commonwealths turned primarily on the right of election of magistrates; or on the balance among the several orders of the state. The question of money was not with them so immediate. But in England it was otherwise. On this point of taxes the ablest pens, and most eloquent tongues, have been exercised; the greatest spirits have acted and suffered. In order to give the fullest satisfaction concerning the importance of this point, it was not only necessary for those who in argument defended the excellence of the English Constitution to insist on this privilege of granting money as a dry point of fact, and to prove that the right had been acknowledged in ancient parchments and blind usages to reside in a certain body called a House of Commons. They went much farther; they attempted to prove, and they succeeded, that in theory it ought to be so, from the particular nature of a House of Commons as an immediate representative of the people, whether the old records had delivered this oracle or not. They took infinite pains to inculcate, as a fundamental principle, that in all monarchies the people must in effect themselves, mediately or immediately, possess the power of granting their own money, or no shadow of liberty can subsist. The Colonies draw from you, as with their life-blood, these ideas and principles. Their love of liberty, as with you, fixed and attached on this specific point of taxing. Liberty might be safe, or might be endangered, in twenty other particulars, without their being much pleased or alarmed. Here they felt its pulse; and as they found that beat, they thought themselves sick or sound."

In America, the word "citizen" held special meaning. The philosophy of its Declaration of Independence and Constitution made the citizen, under the "Governor of the Universe," (Madison) sovereign over its representatives in government--not "subjects" thereof. Thus, the strict constitutional limitations on the power to tax and spend "the People's" money.

Sadly, King George's philosophy has reared its ugly head in America today, as the Founders' Constitution and restraints on government are being denied in an attempt to make Americans "subjects" of an out-of-control political elite.

12 posted on 07/03/2010 9:41:57 AM PDT by loveliberty2
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To: An Old Man

I am sure the MSM will find some way to defame Jefferson (one of the Old Dead White guys) for this. Surely there is some scandal here. Or something racist maybe.
Something, anything.


13 posted on 07/03/2010 9:42:56 AM PDT by Tupelo
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To: Sacajaweau

He did it intentionally and it definitely was not a slip.

It’s true that when it came down to voting, Jefferson excluded black males and, as for women, they weren’t even a blip on the horizon and nobody had even considered including them.

As for black slaves...the Spanish returned to St Augustine, Florida in 1784 after a brief period of British rule after the French and Indian war. The Spanish policy had been to permit runaway slaves who made it to Spanish Florida to be freed, and they also refused to return slaves to the English colonies in Georgia and South Carolina (for which reason St. Augustine was attacked several times by those colonies). And it was Jefferson himself who refused to permit the Spanish to continue with this policy.

Jefferson did what was within his intellectual and moral capacity to do: he set the groundwork for the way an American citizen would relate to the national government.

Obviously, the definition of citizen (in the sense of voting citizen) could be extended, and now blacks and women are full voting citizens. But the fact that Jefferson wasn’t thinking in these terms does not devalue his basic idea.


14 posted on 07/03/2010 9:50:22 AM PDT by livius
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To: Secret Agent Man

That is one of the best points I’ve seen yet. It would never have occurred to me, but Of Course the narcissist-in-chief was referring to faith in him; now that you’ve pointed it out, it’s a given.

On a related note, me when I heard that drivel about citizenship being a matter of faith, all I could think of was that Obama knows there is some question about his legitimacy. As some have speculated, maybe he never renounced his Indonesian citizenship. And/or maybe he applied to Columbia as a foreign national. In any case, you don’t have to buy into everything Freud taught to see Obama’s comments as applicable first and foremost to himself.


15 posted on 07/03/2010 10:03:39 AM PDT by Fantasywriter
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To: An Old Man

And folks have been changing the subject ever since that time.


16 posted on 07/03/2010 10:29:58 AM PDT by Kevmo (So America gets what America deserves - the destruction of its Constitution. ~Leo Donofrio, 6/1/09)
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To: Secret Agent Man

Faith in what? Faith that he can fool and trick people, that’s what.


17 posted on 07/03/2010 12:59:06 PM PDT by little jeremiah
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To: DJ MacWoW
Also of interest is that in 1998, the FBI’s crime lab examined Jefferson's letter, uncovering words deleted by the president (nearly 30 percent of the draft) prior to publication. This, along with other evidence, indicates that Jefferson’s pledge to separate church and state was at least partly political motivated.

James H. Hutson, head of the library’s manuscripts collection, stated, "It will be of considerable interest in assessing the credibility of the Danbury Baptist letter as a tool of constitutional interpretation to know, as we now do, that it was written as a partisan counterpunch, aimed by Jefferson below the belt of enemies who were tormenting him more than a decade after the First Amendment was composed."[18]

Jefferson’s letter and the FBI’s restoration work are among the items in an exhibit at the Library of Congress called, "Religion and the Founding of the American Republic." The exhibit also notes that Jefferson began to attend worship services held at the House of Representatives two days after writing the letter, and that he permitted regular worship services to be held there, a practice that continued until after the Civil War, with preachers from every Protestant denomination appearing there. The Library of Congress exhibit records that

As early as January 1806 a female evangelist, Dorothy Ripley, delivered a camp meeting-style exhortation in the House to Jefferson, Vice President Aaron Burr, and a "crowded audience."...In attending church services on public property, Jefferson and Madison consciously and deliberately were offering symbolic support to religion as a prop for republican government. [19][20]

David Barton, Founder and President of WallBuilders, states that Jefferson voted that the Capitol building would also serve as a church building, praised the use of a local courthouse as a meeting place for Christian services, urged local governments to make land available specifically for Christian purposes, set aside government lands for the sole use of religious groups, assured a Christian religious school that it would receive “the patronage of the government”, proposed that the Great Seal of the United States depict a story from the Bible and include the word “God” in its motto, and agreed to provide money for a church building and support of clergy. And that like support of religion by the federal government militates against the extreme separatist position.[21] http://www.conservapedia.com/Separation_of_church_and_state#Interpretations

18 posted on 07/03/2010 4:28:44 PM PDT by daniel1212 ("Repent ye therefore, and be converted, that your sins may be blotted out " (Acts 3:19))
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