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To: GeorgeWashingtonsGhost

The problem is that the first 3 clauses were written up as separate sentences, followed by the part that completes the thought:

“My parents didn’t come here with nothing. Not knowing anybody. Not having a dime in their pockets… For me to be a wallflower.

What she meant was that her parents came here with nothing, knowing no one, not a dime in their pockets, and they didn’t go through all that to see her be a wallflower.
The fault, Dear Brutus, lies in the pUnct-uat’ion;


9 posted on 08/03/2012 8:24:13 PM PDT by Humble Servant
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To: Humble Servant
I believe that Malkin's message is what counts. The lady makes her living writing, but you guys are a tough crowd.

I wonder what you'd do with "The Sermon on the Mount." :)

10 posted on 08/03/2012 8:37:32 PM PDT by ibytoohi (What the hell has happened to my country?)
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To: Humble Servant

My parents didn’t come here with nothing, not knowing anybody, not having a dime in their pockets for me to be a wallflower.

There fixed it. It was faulty punctuation to make her sound stupid. It actually was one sentence.


11 posted on 08/03/2012 8:41:43 PM PDT by yldstrk ( That is corrMy heroes have always been cowboys)
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