You have become what you hate!! You are Eminem!
At least you proved that anyone can hurl insults and four letter words. What an accomplishment! Congrats.
Now for a critique on your rap song. It reminds me of an inner-city hip hop song. Your have caputured the essence of the african american rap experience with the shallow insults, and especially the repeat 462 times bit. So I guess that really makes you more like Snoop Dog or TuPac than Eminem. Because you see, Eminem is actually very smart, even though he is very offensive. You, apparently, are just offensive.
Here's is my attempt. It is about an imaginary intellectually lost boy from Pennsylvannia who can't control his temper.
What veered was your head, not the thread. Crashed into a wall, smashed and burned. Pitiful lump of quivering brain overstrained, stained with hate and self inflicted pain. When challenged, attack, change the subject, misread, misinterpret, misapply, miss the point, miss, miss again. Self proclaimed attitude, can't read black and white, just wants to fight, long distance, like M and M, you win with hate, now live with your shame. I'm done.
BTW, I forgive you for your direct personal attacks. Just please be a bit more obtuse in the future.
Oh, I don't hate the rappers. Not at all. But I have disdain for many. Particularly those who consider them artists or other such nonsense.
At least you proved that anyone can hurl insults and four letter words.
Not me. Read the original article. Neither 4 letter words (and I prefer the 7 letter one that begins with "dumb") nor insults originated from my mind.
Now for a critique on your rap song.
You might not have caught this, but my concern for your "thoughts" is at an all-time low. The fact that you have bothered to critique it underscores my point even further.
. . . african american rap experience . . . Snoop Dog or TuPac than Eminem. Because you see, Eminem is actually very smart,
Hmmm. I'm beginning to see the appeal of Eminem. Yesssss, he is quite different from other rappers, isn't he? Hmmm.
I'm done.
Promises, promises.
BTW, I forgive you for your direct personal attacks. Just please be a bit more obtuse in the future.
And I forgive you your (1) lies, (2) strawmen, (3) insults, (4) condescension and (5) transparent attempt to catagorize my posts or my point of view in order to make the debate more amenible to your position.
No need to thank me.