The use of nil for none is a nice touch, and suggests either authenticity or a very skilled forger.
I teach a Kenyan student in one of my college classes, and he is very adept and sophisticated in his use of the English language. I’ve noticed that about Kenyans in general.
Someone doodled a star at “maiden”, it looks like it has been folded for some time and you can see the star has mirrod itself above the foldline. Who and when was this doodled?