English is a second language to whoever wrote this. Oh, and they must have found a sale on commas somewhere. I could only handle about five paragraphs before I just gave up. Sounds like it was, probably interesting, though. ;)
(Yes, I inserted extra commas).
English is a second language to whoever wrote this. Oh, and they must have found a sale on commas somewhere. I could only handle about five paragraphs before I just gave up. Sounds like it was, probably interesting, though. ;)
(Yes, I inserted extra commas).
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Thanks for your thoughts on DHS and CPS invading parents’ lives.
You know, I’m as big a grammar policeman as anyone, but I hardly noticed any problem with her writing. I was riveted by the story and what it means about my country.
Bob Grant would call you a pusillanimous pipsqueak.