The author waits about eight paragraphs to give us a clue as to where this place is located.
Agreed, bad style but informative facts.
“The author waits about eight paragraphs to give us a clue as to where this place is located.”
Not enough of a clue for me... Is he talking about California?
Very poorly written article...
A photo would have been helpful as well.
Apache in paragraph 4 was a help.