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To: SandRat

The author waits about eight paragraphs to give us a clue as to where this place is located.


2 posted on 06/10/2016 1:32:27 PM PDT by SoCal Pubbie
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To: SoCal Pubbie; SunkenCiv

Agreed, bad style but informative facts.


3 posted on 06/10/2016 1:35:23 PM PDT by mad_as_he$$
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To: SoCal Pubbie

“The author waits about eight paragraphs to give us a clue as to where this place is located.”

Not enough of a clue for me... Is he talking about California?

Very poorly written article...


4 posted on 06/10/2016 1:56:48 PM PDT by LaRueLaDue
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To: SoCal Pubbie

A photo would have been helpful as well.


8 posted on 06/10/2016 3:29:29 PM PDT by usurper (Liberals GET OFF MY LAWN)
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To: SoCal Pubbie

Apache in paragraph 4 was a help.


19 posted on 06/11/2016 4:02:23 AM PDT by Hieronymus ( (It is terrible to contemplate how few politicians are hanged. --G. K. Chesterton))
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