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To: nickcarraway

“A Woodside man was found guilty of murdering his wife and covering it up as a suicide to collect insurance money this afternoon in San Mateo County Superior Court,”

Is it me or does this read as if he was going to collect insurance money this afternoon in San Mateo County Superior Court?


6 posted on 05/24/2013 11:15:23 AM PDT by Stormdog (A rifle transforms one from subject to Citizen)
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To: Stormdog

The “new journalism”.


7 posted on 05/24/2013 11:19:08 AM PDT by Carriage Hill (Guns kill people, pencils misspell words, cars drive drunk & spoons make you fat.)
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To: Stormdog

A run on sentence by a professional journalist? LOL Here in NY state, they don’t even teach grammar in grade school anymore. Expect lots more of this in years to come.


8 posted on 05/24/2013 11:22:25 AM PDT by tioga
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To: Stormdog
It ain't just you.
apparently “journalism schools” no longer teach composition. Or how to write. Or how to compose and write a comprehensible sentence. Or anything of substance.
11 posted on 05/24/2013 11:34:50 AM PDT by Tupelo (The Government lies, then the media lies to cover up the government lies.)
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To: Stormdog

I thought he murdered her and covered it up this afternoon.


13 posted on 05/24/2013 11:38:05 AM PDT by nickcarraway
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