Oh it’s porn. You are just jaded.
This was originally badly written Twilight fan fiction.
Take out the sex and there is no plot. Actually, even with the sex the plot is lame.
If it describes sex graphically, in an alluring way it’s porn. Even with a third grade vocabulary. Were you to take out the sex then there isn’t even a shred of plot left here.
Well, I suppose as someone who has been married a couple of times for a total of 41 years of my adult life, I may be a bit jaded, having seen just about all there is-and if you think describing graphic sex in an alluring way is porn, that is your opinion as well, and you are entitled to it. And I agree that sex has never helped a bad plot-not even the most smokin’ hot encounter ever is worth reading about or seeing if the rest of the story sucks...
I don’t think many women could be enthused about sex if it was not presented in an alluring way-what is she going to do-close her eyes and think of England, like Victorian women told their daughters to do? We’d all be single women...
And for a lot of adult women who are experienced, graphic can be okay-it can be done without being tasteless or crude...