So what they are saying is that because it is written on a middle school level of literary competence, it’s kiddy porn. Not buying that one. All characters are of age and not being forced into anything. Not saying it’s good, Just not buying into this take on it
No question the book is poorly written.
But this is a professional’s take on it, someone who has dealt for 20 years with the abuse of children.
All characters are of age in a chronological sense, and have to be to maintain the cover of mommy porn.
But what is the girl’s mental age. She is portrayed as a college student who can’t even use a computer, and who is woefully naive for a person 20 years old or so.
Sometimes a story is just a story.
But sometimes it is more. The analysis is quite disturbing.