To: Lazamataz
The writing is very good.
The space discs over big cities, however, seems overused to the point of almost cliché - Independence Day & others?
Good luck with this!
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38 posted on
03/05/2024 10:39:30 AM PST by
Triple
(Socialism denies people the right to the fruits of their labor, and is as abhorrent as slavery)
To: Triple
The space discs over big cities, however, seems overused to the point of almost cliché - Independence Day & others?Well, it kinda cannot be helped. I will tie the discs to the real-life UFO sightings that the government has finally admitted, and it will make more sense why I used this particular (and previously used) trope.
41 posted on
03/05/2024 12:33:15 PM PST by
Lazamataz
(Laz 2005: "First, we beat the Soviet Union. Then we became them.")
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