Here is the Vendome Cliff note to better writing.
Write everything, read it and start cutting until you have the true essence of what you are trying to say.
Otherwise, it’s writing that is on the fly and is what it is.
Also, your title sucked and you can tell by the responses they didn’t bother to read your article.
LOL
Yeah, the title was intended to get a rise out of people. I didn’t anticipate the rest to go unread, however. Stupid of me, given that anything like that is typically ignored here.
Of course, given the theme of my blog, the rising blood pressure I’m noticing is keeping with the theme. Just not exactly how I intended.
I think my points are valid, but am curious how “the opposition” will respond when they read it.