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"But when the thing or person questioned, has power and the ability to send men and women, who have selflessly granted those certain powers unfettered access unto death, those things and people thought to be untouchable, must be questioned. When President Elect Trump announced, he was selecting General Mattis as his Secretary of Defense I was simultaneously elated and troubled."

Whoa, this dude has a major comma fetish.

[amihow]

Poof on your punctuation critique! Did you understand the paragrapgh? Do you have an opinion on the content of the paragraph?

[Flying Circus]

You must be a student of Strunk and White’s atrocious “Elements of Style”. That crappy book has been ruining American writing for nearly a century now.