Honorary firefighter Mike Bellone claims he was approached by unknown bureau agents a short time after he and his partner, Nicholas DeMasi, a retired New York firefighter, found three of the four “black boxes” among the WTC rubble before January 2002.
Finding three of the black boxes in all that chaos, doesn't sound right. First paragraph said he was to keep quiet about "one" of the black boxes.
Something doesn't sound right here.
Exactly. Three out of four black boxes found by two people, from two separate planes that hit separate buildings - and one collapsed before the other. I think the odds of winning the Powerball lottery is better than this happening.
This isn't even quality creative writing.