[processing please hold]

Maybe someone can post a paragraph or two of what they're working on and others can critique it.

[RightWhale]

post a paragraph or two of what they're working on and others can critique it

Not a chance pph. I have to back off a lot as it is to let my posts get past the censor and little would remain of the real stuff. :)

[carton253]

Wow! What would you like to see? Opening few paragraphs or some dialogue. I would love the critique, so tell me what you would like to see.

[JamesP81]

Maybe someone can post a paragraph or two of what they're working on and others can critique it.

I'm not necessarily against this, but we should be cautious. Once you post your work on the internet it's there for all to see, and it'd be easy for someone to come along and help themselves to it. At a minimum, if you're going to do this, leave a copyright notice in the post. It also helps that FR puts a date/time stamp on the post.