That was pretty good. You are describing a concept popularly known as “irreducible complexity”. Here is a pretty good, easy to read piece on the concept that just ALMOST avoids mentioning the words “Intelligent Design”. http://www.ideacenter.org
I’m constantly on the lookout for a succinct description of irreducible complexity that stands a chance of penetrating the current intellectually fashionable belief armor my brother has assumed. What I need is a well written and inarguable summary that doesn’t mention anything to do with a creator or I.D., and in no way even remotely attacks the evolutionists’ dogma in any way. Something a die-hard evolutionist would read to the end without ever being given the opportunity to argue the logic.
Yours came very close to being ideal.
DNA/RNA is an information code, and information codes do not just sort of happen:
"At that moment, when the DNA/RNA system became understood, the debate between Evolutionists and Creationists should have come to a screeching halt
I.L. Cohen, Researcher and Mathematician
Member NY Academy of Sciences
Officer of the Archaeological Inst. of America
Darwin Was Wrong - A Study in Probabilities
New Research Publications, 1984, p. 4