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To: BenLurkin

Who, what, when, where, why, and how - all in the first sentence, if possible.

Six sentences in and we still don’t know the name of the show.

Back to j-school for the writer.

This kind of sloppy writing is becoming increasingly common.


11 posted on 02/10/2013 3:02:04 PM PST by Jack Hammer
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To: Jack Hammer
Six sentences in and we still don’t know the name of the show.

According the LA Times, it isn't named; their permit says it is "Untitled Military Project" for the Discovery Channel.

14 posted on 02/10/2013 3:36:49 PM PST by Strategerist
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