You need an editor. Third paragraph - using “are” when you meant “our.” Third bold paragraph - the term you were looking for is “stage an intervention”, not “innovation.” I agree with your thesis but writing this sort of article puts you in the position of Caesar’s wife.
Thanks for your suggestions.
I have lousy typing skills and am very dependent on my dictation software. And when you have said “our,” your brain tends to read “our” even if the machine has printed “are.”
Dragon Dictate was a wonderful app. Enhanced Dictation on Mohave has problems.