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Posted on 09/30/2003 5:27:59 PM PDT by snippy_about_it
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To: Darkchylde; SAMWolf; Darksheare; Flurry; All
You Haiku, rule followers crack me up!
I don't need no stinking rules!!!
LOL
I am totally Free Verse, I hate punctuation!!
To: snippy_about_it
Good Haiku you two!
Freeper Foxhole!
To: bentfeather
thanks feather. I don't like rules either. ;)
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posted on
10/01/2003 5:17:05 PM PDT
by
snippy_about_it
(Fall in --> The FReeper Foxhole. America's History. America's Soul.)
To: Trikebuilder
Sorry to have not been around lately, but I'm now working 12 hour shifts from 8 PM to 8AM and I'm just wasted, sleeping like a log. will get some free time soon, and will get back to you all.
Trike
Trike, we understand. There is no pressure ever for anyone to post. I know the hours are so hard for you and I pray you are well enough and not in pain to work those hours. Here is a link to our Dragon Flies Lair II. I love your work and will look forward to reading when you have the time and energy to write and post. Please take care of you Trike, my friend.
To: bentfeather
I never said I was trying to follow the
rules, I was just curious to find out if
there was something else I could try.
I found more rules... ];-)
2-3-3
3-5-3
5-7-7
7-5-5
8-4-5
5-9-3
5-8-4
5-12
12-5
8-9
9-8
7-10
10-7
Whether it's your thing or not, trying new
things isn't that bad. If it was, I wouldn't
be doing haiku right now.
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posted on
10/01/2003 5:31:21 PM PDT
by
Darkchylde
(Publishable Menacing Inc.)
To: bentfeather
"2-3-3"
Oops, I meant 2-3-2.
86
posted on
10/01/2003 5:32:30 PM PDT
by
Darkchylde
(Publishable Menacing Inc.)
To: bentfeather
*sigh*
It helps to triple check.
"5-7-7" is meant as 5-7-5.
I even have the numbers written down...
87
posted on
10/01/2003 5:45:29 PM PDT
by
Darkchylde
(Publishable Menacing Inc.)
To: bentfeather
Freeverse forever!!
88
posted on
10/01/2003 6:00:11 PM PDT
by
Darksheare
(This taglines exploits men, women, children, minorities, majorities, pets, and naked mole rats.)
To: bentfeather
That kung fu stuff kills me.
I ate a bug today.
Motorcycle fast,
Bug bitter.
89
posted on
10/01/2003 6:07:45 PM PDT
by
Conspiracy Guy
(I have over 41 years experience, at acting 8 years old. That will be 42 years in Jan 04.)
To: Darkchylde; Flurry
ohhhhh, Darkchylde, I think it's wonderful for folks who enjoy doing it, it's just not my thing.
I have tried these other forms in times past, it's just too, restricting for me.
90
posted on
10/01/2003 7:13:23 PM PDT
by
Soaring Feather
(~Poets' Know the Unknown~)
To: Flurry
They call that Poetry???
Sorry, I must not be on their page.
91
posted on
10/01/2003 7:15:08 PM PDT
by
Soaring Feather
(~Poets' Know the Unknown~)
To: bentfeather
It takes me a while to think of a
way to write something so it fits.
But when I think of something, it
usually sounds good.
Hearing the soft rain
beating on my window pane,
I remember of you.
92
posted on
10/01/2003 7:24:31 PM PDT
by
Darkchylde
(Publishable Menacing Inc.)
To: Darksheare; SAMWolf; snippy_about_it; Darkchylde; Flurry; Trikebuilder; Johnny Gage; Graewoulf; ...
 Her name whispers desire
ecstacy in old love
A soft soul against crystal
weighed roses with dew on her hair...
bentfeather
a/k/a MLH
Copyright (C)2003
All Rights Reserved
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93
posted on
10/01/2003 7:38:37 PM PDT
by
Soaring Feather
(~Poets' Know the Unknown~)
To: bentfeather
Good evening feather, very nice.
94
posted on
10/01/2003 8:41:55 PM PDT
by
snippy_about_it
(Fall in --> The FReeper Foxhole. America's History. America's Soul.)
To: Darkchylde
Hearing the soft rain
beating on my window pane,
I remember of you.
This is lovely, Chylde.
95
posted on
10/01/2003 8:50:00 PM PDT
by
Soaring Feather
(~Poets' Know the Unknown~)
To: snippy_about_it
Evening snippy, thanks much. You have probably gone to bed by now. Have a good sleep.
96
posted on
10/01/2003 8:51:38 PM PDT
by
Soaring Feather
(~Poets' Know the Unknown~)
To: bentfeather
nope, still awake.
97
posted on
10/01/2003 9:05:44 PM PDT
by
snippy_about_it
(Fall in --> The FReeper Foxhole. America's History. America's Soul.)
To: bentfeather
Touch the rose for the Good night song.
98
posted on
10/01/2003 10:11:38 PM PDT
by
Soaring Feather
(~Poets' Know the Unknown~)
To: bentfeather
#99
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posted on
10/01/2003 10:12:10 PM PDT
by
Soaring Feather
(~Poets' Know the Unknown~)
To: SAMWolf
#100
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