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Mia, you know that I admire your work...

However, this time you've missed the mark. Your virtual bill is much too slender. Your portrayal of his face and skull are thinner than that of the lean and healthy image of a frontier woodsman.

No, no, no.

Our bill is a bloated and corpulent visage. Like the popular image of Nero, our billy is a compendium of the worst of human behavior. A monster, if you will. He has the face of our national horrors - the cooked fish flesh of the dead and the wrinkled leer of the dirty old man. However, his is also a mug that is coarse and wide, reflecting a lifetime of gluttony and the exercise of evil. Yep. Our billy has a kisser that has muscle in the jaws ("...so much better to hold you while I rape you, my Dear" jaws). The bags under the eyes that bespeak a lifetime of vice and weakness. The airless environs in which his debauches occur leave traces of their pollution in his eyes and soul. His flabby, wrinkled and jowled face telegraphs the body beneath and the mind within.

In short, the man is a pig - portray him as such.

I actually agree with you. I neglected the FIGURE-ative. ;)

The rapist has been working on the paunch of late; the old mug has slimmed down. And other than those huge bags, redundant flesh draping steely orbs and some under-neck looseness, he, unlike hillary. really isn't all that wrinkled. ( I wonder why they both have those massive bags, tho....)

But he does look too young and benign, especially in the still. I have to work on that. BTW, if you look at the initial virtual hillary, she suffered from the same problem. Not enough age, too much benign.

"Our bill is a bloated and corpulent visage. Like the popular image of Nero, our billy is a compendium of the worst of human behavior. A monster, if you will. He has the face of our national horrors - the cooked fish flesh of the dead and the wrinkled leer of the dirty old man. However, his is also a mug that is coarse and wide, reflecting a lifetime of gluttony and the exercise of evil. Yep. Our billy has a kisser that has muscle in the jaws ("...so much better to hold you while I rape you, my Dear" jaws). The bags under the eyes that bespeak a lifetime of vice and weakness. The airless environs in which his debauches occur leave traces of their pollution in his eyes and soul. His flabby, wrinkled and jowled face telegraphs the body beneath and the mind within." You're good, WCF! And Mia, I've bookmarked this one, in part because of the dates! Great work m'Lady.