Hooooah!
Very lame. Announcer talking way too fast, cramming in too much info. Sounds like a late night used car offer. No music, choppy images, no GRAVITAS. Not even close to the impact of the Swiftie ads.
No offense but this is a terrible TV ad. It works fine a an internet ad, but would play terribly on TV.
First of all it needs to be reduce to 30 seconds.
Secondly of all it needs a new narrator that speaks more slowly.
Thirdly it needs to be more focused. If you try to say too much in an ad people can't remember what they saw. The ad needs to make no more than 3 points. If it focuses on just three, people will remember them and the idea will be much more effective.