You want to point out where I used the English language poorly exactly? You sound like you are about to bust out bawling because I said your song sucked, you've posted like 10 times rantin' and a ravin'. Your whinging is as redundant as your parody song. Btw, a pop song is a different construct than a parody song. Of course you have repetition in a pop song, that's part of the formula. A parody is a different animal. If you realize that you'll write better comedy. Believe it or not, I actually get paid to write crap like this.
Bwaaaaahahahahahah. Did you read that sentence? Read it again.
"whinging" ???
Where did I display poor language skillz? I'm sorry to tell you that posting on an internet forum is not the top priority of my life, yes I forgot, I didn't think it was all that important but fear not, I've whipped out a song for you to criticize just now!