[doug from upland]

My reaction to the song. Let's see. What would be appropriate? I know. I've got it. ----

you song doesn't really scan at all
If you are going to make parody lyrics the lyrics should scan properly, and try making the verses rhyme. Other than that the lyrics aren't particularly funny or clever. Sorry, can't cheerlead this just because it slams Dems. Writing parody lyrics is an art. This ain't art. Its lame.

[puppets]

Pft. Your critique style is as unique, original and witty as your parody. I was hoping for a real slam-dance deconstruction of my work, but I guess copy/paste is your forte. Cheers.
-dw