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TWO THOUSAND ONE, NINE ELEVEN (2001-911)
EMail | 9/8/06 | Unknown

Posted on 09/08/2006 1:57:38 PM PDT by TChris

TWO THOUSAND ONE, NINE ELEVEN (2001-911)

Two thousand one, nine eleven
Three thousand plus arrive in heaven
As they pass through the gate,
Thousands more appear in wait

A bearded man with stovepipe hat
Steps forward saying, "Lets sit, lets chat"
They settle down in seats of clouds
A man named Martin shouts out proud
"I have a dream!" and once he did
The Newcomer said, "Your dream still lives."

Groups of soldiers in blue and gray
Others in khaki, and green then say
"We're from Bull Run , Yorktown , the Maine "
The Newcomer said, "You died not in vain."

From a man on sticks one could hear
"The only thing we have to fear.
The Newcomer said, "We know the rest,
Trust us sir, we've passed that test."

"Courage doesn't hide in caves
You can't bury freedom, in a grave,"
The Newcomers had heard this voice before
A distinct Yankees twang from Hyannisport shores

A silence fell within the mist
Somehow the Newcomer knew that this
Meant time had come for her to say
What was in the hearts of the five thousand plus that day

"Back on Earth, we wrote reports,
Watched our children play in sports
Worked our gardens, sang our songs
Went to church and clipped coupons

We smiled, we laughed,
we cried, we fought
Unlike you, great we're not"

The tall man in the stovepipe hat
Stood and said, "Don't talk like that!
Look at your country, look and see
You died for freedom, just like me"

Then, before them all appeared a scene
Of rubbled streets and twisted beams
Death, destruction, smoke and dust
And people working just 'cause they must

Hauling ash, lifting stones,
Knee deep in hell, but not alone
"Look! Blackman, Whiteman, Brownman, Yellowman
Side by side helping their fellow man!"

So said Martin, as he watched the scene
"Even from nightmares, can be born a dream."
Down below three firemen raised
The colors high into ashen haze

The soldiers above had seen it before
On Iwo Jima back in '45
The man on sticks studied everything closely
Then shared his perceptions on what he saw mostly

"I see pain, I see tears,
I see sorrow -- but I don't see fear."
"You left behind husbands and wives
Daughters and sons and so many lives
Are suffering now because of this wrong
But look very closely. You're not really gone.

All of those people, even those who've never met you
All of their lives, they'll never forget you
Don't you see what has happened?
Don't you see what you've done?
You've brought them together, together as one.

With that the man in the stovepipe hat said
"Take my hand," and from there he led
Three thousand plus heroes, Newcomers to heaven
On this day, two thousand one, nine eleven

Author UNKNOWN (What a shame!)


TOPICS: Editorial; Miscellaneous; News/Current Events
KEYWORDS: 911; bravery; freedom; tribute
Just received this in my email. Very timely poetry.
1 posted on 09/08/2006 1:57:40 PM PDT by TChris
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To: TChris

Someone had sent it to me a number of years ago. I've had a computer crash since then and lost it -- lost her e-mail address as well. Thanks!


2 posted on 09/08/2006 2:00:14 PM PDT by scrabblehack
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To: scrabblehack

BTTT


3 posted on 09/08/2006 2:05:51 PM PDT by retrokitten
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To: TChris

My personal tribute to one of those lost:
http://www.freerepublic.com/focus/f-bloggers/1697994/posts


4 posted on 09/08/2006 2:07:27 PM PDT by Alice in Wonderland
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To: scrabblehack

I am reluctant to change any author's writing but in the version I received, I'm pretty sure it was "Iwo Jima in '44," rhyming with "before" -- the battle actually was '45 -- might I suggest changing the previous line to "seen it live?"

And of course change "Yankees twang" to "Yankee's twang."


5 posted on 09/08/2006 2:10:18 PM PDT by scrabblehack
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To: TChris
Thanks for posting that....

We will get Osama.

6 posted on 09/08/2006 2:10:42 PM PDT by Dog (Never forget...)
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To: Alice in Wonderland
My personal tribute to one of those lost:

Thank you. He was truly a remarkable man. I'm certain there are many more like him, and I thank God for them.

7 posted on 09/08/2006 2:14:03 PM PDT by TChris (Banning DDT wasn't about birds. It was about power.)
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To: scrabblehack
I am reluctant to change any author's writing but...

Yeah, these things typically go through many revisions as they pass from one InBox to another.

8 posted on 09/08/2006 2:29:49 PM PDT by TChris (Banning DDT wasn't about birds. It was about power.)
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To: TChris

Celebrate FREEDOM! Buy a Gun for 9/11 !!!


9 posted on 09/10/2006 9:49:39 AM PDT by 2harddrive (...House a TOTAL Loss.....)
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