The first two paragraphs are deadly, and they must be dynamite, if you want anyone to read on. Clearly and succintly state your thesis and then point to what you are offering. Something like this, There are five important moral isues that are important in the congressional elections. Please review them below. When you do, I am sur you will agree that Christians should vote Republican.
I think you meant your comment to me. I'll work on making my first two paragraphs more catching...
Thank you.