To: genefromjersey
It’s disappointing when a major written effort fails to explain in the first paragraph what it is about, and why it might be important for me to care.
6 posted on
04/11/2007 3:58:52 PM PDT by
Atlas Sneezed
(Your FRiendly FReeper Patent Attorney)
To: Beelzebubba
I agree. The writer has way too much time on his hands.
8 posted on
04/11/2007 4:05:12 PM PDT by
Thud
To: Beelzebubba
It’s disappointing when a major written effort fails to explain in the first paragraph what it is about, and why it might be important for me to care.The headline of the article could be compared to a topic sentence. The headline alone suggests that it might be important for you to care. ;)
11 posted on
04/11/2007 6:07:11 PM PDT by
Chena
(I want a President who will also be tough against liberalism. (Kevin McCullough))
To: Beelzebubba
It’s disappointing when a major written effort fails to explain in the first paragraph what it is about, and why it might be important for me to care.I thought the same thing...couldn't get past the first few tedious sentences.
41 posted on
04/12/2007 4:27:06 PM PDT by
Junior_G
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