“it’s” (contraction for “it is”) is used at least twice incorrectly instead of its (possessive).
What about world’s......is that used correctly? Just askin.
I see it’s in there two times and its in there once. Yes, I missed one. The second “it’s” should actually be “its”. However, the first one is correct. The “its” is correct. So, make that two mistakes in the entire thing. If it’s the point you don’t agree with, then tell why. However, this grammar was not horrible enough to warrant the type of response it got, especially when the one responding is wrong about part of it.
Let him who is without sin cast the first stone. (hehe..I guess that can apply here.)