May I respectfully offer the following suggested changes? ...
“When Senator Barack Obama was state senator in Illinois, he voted 4 times against the Born Alive Infant Protection Act which protects premature babies born alive. Barack Obama would allow these prematurely born babies to die alone in a room without comfort or medical attention, rather than help save their lives. The Constitution gives these babies human rights at birth, but Barack Obama would remove these Constitutional rights.”
‘“When Senator Barack Obama was state senator in Illinois, he voted 4 times against the Born Alive Infant Protection Act which protects premature babies born alive. Barack Obama would allow these prematurely born babies to die alone in a room without comfort or medical attention, rather than help save their lives. The Constitution gives these babies human rights at birth, but Barack Obama would remove these Constitutional rights.”’
Excellent. I’ll revise my letter.