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To: youngidiot
Heavy, man..

Let me try one.

Potted meat and liver cheese,
Fly away in your best non-flammable pajamas.
Its against the law to smack your granny.
Stomp on a fish stick, stomp on a fish stick.
Quoth the mongoose, "Nevermore".

17 posted on 01/20/2009 1:29:06 PM PST by Drawsing (The fool shows his annoyance at once. The prudent man overlooks an insult. (Proverbs 12:16))
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To: Drawsing
Potted meat and liver cheese,
Fly away in your best non-flammable pajamas.
Its against the law to smack your granny.
Stomp on a fish stick, stomp on a fish stick.
Quoth the mongoose, "Nevermore".


That's outstanding. My life just changed.
20 posted on 01/20/2009 1:41:26 PM PST by youngidiot
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To: Drawsing

After scratching my head in absolute amazement as she
delivered her “poem” this am, I at least had a great laugh
with the FR versions!

Thanks


21 posted on 01/20/2009 1:45:23 PM PST by Lesforlife
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To: Drawsing
Potted meat and liver cheese, Fly away in your best non-flammable pajamas. Its against the law to smack your granny. Stomp on a fish stick, stomp on a fish stick. Quoth the mongoose, "Nevermore".

Wow!

This amazing poem moves to interrogate the image of non-flammable pajamas, as someone in the poem called Donna recognises this as her sleepwear. The girl thinks: "This can not be my sleepwear." But it is. The pajamas call to her, but the girl is struck dumb. The potted meat and liver cheese cry: "Girl? Stomp on a fish stick, stomp on a fish stick." But there can be no answer, no mongoose. Nevermore.

You are a brilliant poet, and brilliantly in tune with the new president.

22 posted on 01/20/2009 2:26:46 PM PST by DonGrafico (Underwriting America's permanent underclass since 1975)
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