“a book written by someone who can’t construct two cohesive sentences together.”
Either redundant or ignorant: if “cohesive”, “construct” already makes the point. If “coherent”, the writer shows why a thesaurus is such a great tool.
Sheesh...
Colonel, USAFR
With one sentence Geoffrey Dunn has completely undermined his point and impeached his self-proclaimed credibility as an icon of intellectual integrity.
“a book written by someone who can’t construct two cohesive sentences together.”
Either redundant or ignorant: if “cohesive”, “construct” already makes the point. If “coherent”, the writer shows why a thesaurus is such a great tool.
Sheesh...
Colonel, USAFR
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You nailed it, it struck me the same way, “cohesive” just grates on the nerves in that sentence.