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To: Haiku Guy

Better...

If You have a Right
To the Service I provide,
I must be Your Slave.

4 posted on 10/19/2009 3:59:13 AM PDT by Haiku Guy (If You have a Right / To the Service I provide / I must be a Slave)

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To: Haiku Guy

I think you still need one more syllable.
So I advise you put “Joe” as the last word.

5 posted on 10/19/2009 4:04:40 AM PDT by supremedoctrine (The being who sleeps alone, is rocked by all the beings he loves, has loved, and shall love.)

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