Didn’t know it was an article requiring a grammar lesson.
Nitpicking survives on FR.
I would not call it nitpicking. When a professional writer presents ideas in an unclear manner, it is very difficult for the reader to take his message seriously.
You’ve got to admit, this “article” is unintelligible. Is this a “real” newspaper? Is this a “real” reporter?
If you’re the writer, no offense intended but please, please, please, get someone to edit your work.
I love editors. Editors are your friend.
I’d comment on the article but I’m not sure what it is saying......
People take a lot of prescription drugs in Utah? That’s well known. Taking prescription drugs leads to unemployment? What a surprise! The statement: “Lack of health insurance was one characteristic that we hadn’t known before,” makes absolutely no sense as if you’re taking prescription drugs you’ve got to be going to a doctor to get the prescription.