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The scandal surrounding Ambassador Steven’s murder in Benghazi, Libya. It was very near the article’s end.


4 posted on 10/03/2012 12:51:52 PM PDT by SatinDoll (NATURAL BORN CITZEN: BORN IN THE USA OF CITIZEN PARENTS.)
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The scandal surrounding Ambassador Steven’s murder in Benghazi, Libya. It was very near the article’s end.

Since when did the venerable "Introductory Paragraph" become a license to elucidate anecdotal reports about last week's lunch without a single reference to the subject at hand?

Lately I've been seeing tons of articles with "catchy" "artsy" intros that give me no clue whatsoever that I should bother to continue reading.

Tell me what you're going to tell me.

Tell me.

Then tell me what you told me.

I would blame it on "writing-for-web-hits" except that it accomplishes the direct opposite.

9 posted on 10/03/2012 12:57:09 PM PDT by sam_paine (X .................................)
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