Darn it. Sorry for the headline. Can a moderator please fix that.
I hate this style of story writing. it goes around in circles. i’m kind of sequential. kind of like how life comes out. In sequence i think you get more of the impact of the decisions he had to make. it’s like the story teller is more interest in display his style than telling the story. may be it’s just me. couldn’t finish it or find where to connect the dots. is this relativist writing?