I read this thesis. It is a horrible muddle of fractured syntax, incoherence, puffed up racial grievance with an unhealthy dose of narcissim, non-grammatical sentence structure, misspelling, verb/subject warfare, coat and tie radical cultural marxism, arguably the worst ever thesis from a major political figure EVER.
It is the best evidence that I would present for her neurotic thin skin. She knows that she is a beneficiary of academic racial preference and behaves as one who reacts defensively to conceal that fact.
It’s racist to expect her to have good grammar.
...I’m not kidding, there was a story a while back where the black students at Stanford(?) were complaining that their teacher was taking off for poor English - and naturally calling it racism.