I’m probably going against the grain here. Won’t be the first time.
But using the b-lls word 5 times in that little story is downright vulgar.
Maybe one time to make a point, but 5 times is not just vulgar but downright childish. Like a little boy using his first cuss word, just can’t get enough of it, with a bunch of adults reading it thinking it’s cute.
+1. I am seriously not impressed by this piece at all. It sounds grade schoolish.
OK. You’re right. Angry, vulgar, childish. I apologize for the totally off-the-cuff post.