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Evangelii gaudium 54 (“trickle-down economics”). Significant translation error...
WDTPRS ^ | 11/29/2013 | Fr. John Zuhlsdorf

Posted on 11/29/2013 9:10:30 AM PST by markomalley

I have mentioned that people have raised translation problems with the new Apostolic Exhortation Evangelii gaudium. I posted under another entry about problems with par. 54, which in the English translation mentions “trickle-down” economics.

Since that other post delved into more things – the discussion there has been interesting – I thought it useful to pull out of EG 54 just the first part.

Let us assume that the original composition was Spanish:

54. En este contexto, algunos todavía defienden las teorías del «derrame», que suponen que todo crecimiento económico, favorecido por la libertad de mercado, logra provocar por sí mismo mayor equidad e inclusión social en el mundo.

Official English…

In this context, some people continue to defend trickle-down theories which assume that economic growth, encouraged by a free market, will inevitably succeed in bringing about greater justice and inclusiveness in the world.

Over at the other post a commentator pointed out that the official English rendering of EG 54 makes Spanish “por si’ mismo” into “inevitably”, but that it really means “by itself”.

Let’s swap in the “by itself” and read it again.

In this context, some people continue to defend trickle-down theories ["trickle down economics"] which assume that economic growth, encouraged by a free market, will by itself succeed in bringing about greater justice and inclusiveness in the world.

There is a big difference between “inevitably” and “by itself”!

There are uses of “mismo” that have to do with time, such as “ahora mismo” (“right now”).  This is not one of those.

I think we can stipulate that “las teorías del «derrame»” is an adequate expression for English “trickle down” economics.  We can drill, I suppose, into who generally uses the phrase “trickle down”.  Some will say that only critics use the phrase.  Let’s leave that aside.  Also, I am not convinced that “justice and inclusiveness” does justice to “equidad e inclusión social”.  ”Equidad” is not “justice”.

But the real point here is that in EG 54 the author says that “trickle down” economics cannot by itself produce the desired result.

That is, of course, correct.

No economic plan will solve the problems of the poor by itself.  Economic plans must be carried out by people who have good, solid morals and values.

I submit that these morals and values must be rooted in religion.

Bottom line: Whoever did the English translation of EG 54 did Pope Francis and the watching world a grave disservice and caused confusion.  The use of “inevitably” for ”por si’ mismo” changes the meaning of the key phrase in a significant way.  The confusion will be difficult to rectify.

The Pope is not so much condemning a specific approach to helping the poor, though I think it is fair to assume that he isn’t a fan of “trickle-down” economics.  What he is really going after is the notion that markets, plans, schemes, theories, what have you, can be relied on to help the poor by themselves, that is, without our personal engagement and choice to take responsibility actually to help the poor in concrete ways.


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To: markomalley

Very good!

Another related offering:

http://www.thecatholicthing.org/columns/2013/tea-party-catholics.html

Religious freedom and economic freedom are linked. ;-)


21 posted on 11/29/2013 3:06:44 PM PST by SumProVita (Cogito, ergo....Sum Pro Vita - Modified Descartes)
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To: markomalley

Also, here are two worthwhile videos and the link to both:

1. Rev. Robert A. Sirico Comments on the Economic Views of Pope Francis in ‘Evangelii Gaudium’

2. PovertyCure trailer

http://blog.acton.org/archives/63186-video-rev-robert-sirico-responds-pope-francis-economic-views-evangelii-gaudium.html


22 posted on 11/29/2013 3:11:37 PM PST by SumProVita (Cogito, ergo....Sum Pro Vita - Modified Descartes)
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To: Petrosius
As to EG 54 itself, you may indeed be right but unless you are a native speaker of Spanish and know the usage "derrame" in Argentina I would caution you to be a bit more humble in your accusations.

Apparently you did not read my post, and I'm not sure you've read EG 54 in any language. As I made clear, the meaning of one specific Spanish word (in or out of a particular idiom) is entirely irrelevant when the rest of the document makes quite plain that the intention was derogatory.

Or do you think there are also alternative definitions for the characterizations of "crude" and "naive" regarding those who believe in free markets?

As for the rest of your rebuttal: completely pointless. Of course I am only talking about the part of the document that discusses economics.

23 posted on 11/29/2013 4:13:25 PM PST by FredZarguna (The sequel, thoroughly pointless, derivative, and boring was like all James Cameron "films.")
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To: Don Corleone; markomalley

My Spanish isn’t that good, but I was prompted to look up the presumed original of the second sentence in 280 (the only mention in subsidiarity in the whole work), and I am fairly certain it was botched pretty badly. The Spanish, near as I can tell, is coherent and consistent with past teaching—the English is arguably neither.

There also looks to be another problem—I think that Spanish is more prone to use exaggeration to make a point—which, if read in context, is not at all confusing. Translated into English, not so good. And to use too many infinitives to communicate is not to employ standard English.

On the flip side, there are some quotations that show just how good a prose artist Aquinas was—translated into English through the Spanish he is clearer than the translator is capable of making the Pope without an intervening language.

In fairness to whomever is translating, no one has ever been called to translate Papal documents from Spanish to English before, or likely from anything other than Latin into English without a Papal proofreading. So long as everyone was operating from Latin, one knew what to expect. At least, contrary to my first thought, Reggie Foster can’t be blamed (the leading English speaking Latinist in Rome is also a Maoist).


24 posted on 11/29/2013 4:18:48 PM PST by Hieronymus ( (It is terrible to contemplate how few politicians are hanged. --G.K. Chesterton))
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To: FredZarguna
Evangelii gaudium in its entirety calls for government interventions on behalf of the disadvantaged …

As I made clear, the meaning of one specific Spanish word (in or out of a particular idiom) is entirely irrelevant when the rest of the document makes quite plain that the intention was derogatory.

Of course I am only talking about the part of the document that discusses economics.

Which is it, the document "in its entirety" and "the rest of the document" or "only the part that discusses economics"?

The document is about evangelization not economics. You are falling into the trap of the media spinning it to mean something else. Yes, I too am uncomfortable, about some of what he says about economics (assuming the translation is accurate, which I admit is possible) but let us not make more out of it than we should. The document is about evangelization.

25 posted on 11/29/2013 4:55:45 PM PST by Petrosius
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To: FredZarguna

The document is long, (Hopelessly) complex, and nuanced. Did you pick up on him knocking welfare—twice?

Welfare projects, which meet certain urgent needs, should be considered merely temporary responses. (202)

Growth in justice requires more than economic growth, while presupposing such growth: it requires decisions, programmes, mechanisms and processes specifically geared to a better distribution of income, the creation of sources of employment and an integral promotion of the poor which goes beyond a simple welfare mentality. I am far from proposing an irresponsible populism, but the economy can no longer turn to remedies that are a new poison, such as attempting to increase profits by reducing the work force and thereby adding to the ranks of the excluded. (204)

Deficit spending is also knocked in paragraph 54.


26 posted on 11/29/2013 5:26:56 PM PST by Hieronymus ( (It is terrible to contemplate how few politicians are hanged. --G.K. Chesterton))
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To: Petrosius
You are still picking nits in order to defend something indefensible, and in any case your understanding of logic is faulty. The words contained in EG 54 are a proper subset of the entire document. What is written about economics is a subset of EG 54. Therefore, what is said about economics in the entire document is not different from what is said in EG 54.

It works like this A ⊂ B ⊂ C implies what is said in A about a topic is also said in C. If C is about something more, but all of what is written about economics is entirely in A, than the entirety of what is said in A on that subject is not different than the entirety of what is said in C on that subject.

Get it?

What is said is entirely within the standard (and incorrect) understanding of economics promulgated by the Society of Jesus. I am happy to see that it would make your uncomfortable; it should.

27 posted on 11/29/2013 5:28:19 PM PST by FredZarguna (The sequel, thoroughly pointless, derivative, and boring was like all James Cameron "films.")
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To: Hieronymus
it requires decisions, programmes, mechanisms and processes specifically geared to a better distribution of income,

Neither complex, nor nuanced.

Game. Set. Match.

Goodbye.

28 posted on 11/29/2013 5:30:30 PM PST by FredZarguna (The sequel, thoroughly pointless, derivative, and boring was like all James Cameron "films.")
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To: FredZarguna
Nice try but subset ≠ entire. If you were limit your critique to para. 54 and recognize that this is only incidental to the message of the entire document we might actually be able to come to an agreement.
29 posted on 11/29/2013 5:37:14 PM PST by Petrosius
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To: FredZarguna

He makes a distinction between welfare (handouts) and income. He believes that in many situations welfare needs to be diminished and income increased. He holds that situations that do not do this are not long-term solutions, and a program of prosperity that involves putting more people on welfare so that the remainder may have a higher income is not a good thing.

Do you prefer the government making decisions, and creating mechanisms and processes that lead to people with no income but surviving on welfare?


30 posted on 11/29/2013 5:47:07 PM PST by Hieronymus ( (It is terrible to contemplate how few politicians are hanged. --G.K. Chesterton))
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To: Petrosius

Where else in the document does he talk about economics?


31 posted on 11/29/2013 6:51:35 PM PST by FredZarguna (The sequel, thoroughly pointless, derivative, and boring was like all James Cameron "films.")
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To: Hieronymus
You are not reading what he actually wrote, because you don't want to believe it.

"it requires decisions, programmes, mechanisms and processes specifically geared to a better distribution of income,"

Who makes the decisions? Who creates the programmes? And what are the mechanisms and processes specifically geared toward a "better distribution of income?"

In case you still have doubts about the socialism inherent in his message, he specifically eschews

"attempting to increase profits by reducing the work force [sic]"

So might well have Pius X written of the disappearing workforce in the buggy whip trade, or the disappearing workforce created by Henry Ford's massive use of component/assembly design. Never mind that such a "disappearance" made motor vehicles accessible to the middle class, while hand-made cars had been nothing more than a rich man's toy. [And never mind that Marx, Engels, and Lenin wrote often of the same sort of nonsense.]

Reduction in force is part of the way capitalism works.

Period.

It gives rise to better efficiencies, cheaper products with higher quality, and new ideas and technologies as the money once wasted on protecting an obsolete methodology is freed to fund creativity. The remedy for a lost job is a new job, and the remedy to socialist claptrap is to reject it and stop making excuses for it.

Had the Pope merely wanted to make a point about the virtue of charity against the backdrop of amoral free market economics, he need not have spoken derisively about "trickle down economics" (there is no such thing) nor described those who believe in free economies as the best vehicle for compassionate treatment of the disadvantaged as "crude" and "naive." You can't pick and choose what's in here so that you can ignore the parts of the message you don't like. It says what it says.

32 posted on 11/29/2013 7:11:59 PM PST by FredZarguna (The sequel, thoroughly pointless, derivative, and boring was like all James Cameron "films.")
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To: markomalley
Should Pope Francis have used the term subsidiarity rather than "trickle down"?

Actually, subsidiarity means trickle up.

Problems -- start to solve them within your family, then your local church, local organizations, local community, then up to the county level, and up to the state level, and finally to a federal level.

Some of these threads explain it much better than I am doing.

Repeat After Me: Subsidiarity & Solidarity
Subsidiarity and Human Dignity
Does the USCCB Understand Subsidiarity?
[CATHOLIC CAUCUS] The Principle of Subsidiarity
[CATHOLIC/ORTHODOX CAUCUS] Subsidiarity Over Social Justice
What is the USCCB’s problem with subsidiarity?
Subsidiarity: Where Justice and Freedom Coexist
Health reform still full of thorny problems for Catholics (Vasa comes out for subsidiarity)
What You [Catholics] Need to Know: Subsidiarity, [Catholic/Orthodox Caucus]
Catholic Word of the Day: SUBSIDIARITY, 06-11-09

33 posted on 11/29/2013 7:53:36 PM PST by Salvation ("With God all things are possible." Matthew 19:26)
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To: Don Corleone

Wonder who is in charge? Someone like Father Reese?


34 posted on 11/29/2013 10:39:23 PM PST by RobbyS (quotes)
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To: FredZarguna

You are falling into the same trap. Not all business decisions are driven by the need to meet competition. Sometimes it is just to follow blindly the lead of some executive with a bad idea, such as the now departed chief executive of Penny’s. And from Ricardo onwards, many businessmen have been guilty of a mindset not unlike that of the “enclosing landlords” familiar to Thomas More, that treats human beings as expendable. As a critique of the social effects of capitalism, socialism has always had something truthful to say. It is only as a viable alternative, that socialism falls down, because it always concentrates power more than the worst plutocracy and will never yield control in the face of the most abject failures.


35 posted on 11/29/2013 11:01:00 PM PST by RobbyS (quotes)
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To: RobbyS
Not falling into any trap; it's the Pope who's fallen into the trap, and it's hilarious watching people attempt to make excuses for his economic "philosophy."

As for socialist Utopian "Saint" Sir Thomas Moore, well, he would certainly know about the expendability of human beings, wouldn't he? Or do you think the man who tortured and burned human beings alive was all sweetness and light, like the fictional character in Robert Bolt's play?

As a critique of the social effects of capitalism, socialism has always had something truthful to say.

Its critique -- like the Pope's -- is nonsense, laying the problems of the poor at the feet of free markets. The problem of poverty has been widely studied. Many of the people classified as "poor" in this country are poor by their own choices, and capitalism has exactly nothing to do with it. The Church, like socialists, has always known indigent people nursing fantasy resentments are an easy mark for demagogues and they have gone at advancing them with great gusto. For the genuinely poor, there is charity and guess which economic system produces (overwhelmingly) the most of that? It sure as hell isn't the "system" with "something truthful" to say.

36 posted on 11/29/2013 11:29:15 PM PST by FredZarguna (The sequel, thoroughly pointless, derivative, and boring was like all James Cameron "films.")
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To: Salvation
Should Pope Francis have used the term subsidiarity rather than "trickle down"?

He didn't really use "trickle down" -- he used the word "spillage" (teorías del « derrame » = theories of "spillage")

I would imagine that it roughly tries to capture the same topic.

And, no, I actually think he used it correctly.

Imagine if you had employers who:

What would they do? I would submit that they would pay these people the minimum they possibly could...regardless of how much value each person brings to the value chain.

As Christians, we would want to pay people justly (See S.Th. II-II-61-2) in the proportion to which they contribute to the production of products / services delivered by our company. Without that fundamental Christian ethic built into our psyche, we would strictly follow the laws of supply and demand.

As far as I understand, the theory of supply-side economics impacts labor rates in the following way: when there is reduced taxation and regulation placed upon industry, that industry will increase production. As industry increases production, there is an increased demand. That requires both a) increased requirements for plant/equipment (thus requiring production to produce that plant/equipment) and b) increased requirements for labor to operate that plant/equipment. As there is an increase in demand on a stable labor force, the prices for that labor will increase.

In "developing" countries, there is still a vast surplus of labor. Therefore, prices for that labor are still depressed. The question that follows (at least in my mind) is when a condition of "scarcity" will start to exist, thus allowing the prices to rise.

As I said above, as Christians, we would want to pay people justly (St. Thomas Aquinas talked about distributive justice being accomplished by distributing common goods (in this case, revenues) according to the "geometric mean" ...). With Christian ethics, we know to do that as "the right thing" to do. Without Christian ethics, people would only do so when "forced" by economic pressures.


Frankly, what concerns me with this document is the emphasis on "inequality" rather than on justice. For example: "Inequality is the root of social ills." (§202)

This seems to be in contradiction to much of the Papal Magesterium.

A review of previous papal issuances shows the following:

Sorry for the massive post, but I don't want to make some sort of claim without providing adequate proof to back it up.

And let me emphasize that I am not making any sort of accusation here nor am I drawing a conclusion...I am simply pointing out something that is concerning to me at this juncture.

37 posted on 11/30/2013 4:35:57 AM PST by markomalley (Nothing emboldens the wicked so greatly as the lack of courage on the part of the good -- Leo XIII)
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To: markomalley
Thanks for a thoughtful post. Place-marking for later.

A thoughtful discussion of this is... refreshing.

38 posted on 11/30/2013 4:40:10 AM PST by St_Thomas_Aquinas ( Isaiah 22:22, Matthew 16:19, Revelation 3:7)
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To: markomalley

IDK how “por so mismo” could be translated as “inevitably” in the first place.


39 posted on 11/30/2013 6:49:35 AM PST by ottbmare (the OTTB mare, now a proud Marine Mom)
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To: markomalley

I think this post (37) could be its own thread. Great research!


40 posted on 11/30/2013 9:47:02 AM PST by Salvation ("With God all things are possible." Matthew 19:26)
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