[Ichneumon]

I like the essay, but if you're going to send it out to more people, use a spellchecker on it first. I spotted at least fifteen typos in it. People take letters and essays less seriously when they're riddled with misspellings.

[Jeff Head]

Thanks for the constructive criticism.

On the BLOG page where this thread links, I have corrected most of them. I was writing that pretty quickly with some emotion and a lot of typos and errors crept in.