Okay, first, it's waaaaay too wordy to make a good logo. It should be something kids can doodle in their notebooks when they're bored at school. Second, those angular lines have GOT to go. Their soooo "look at me, I'm trying to be a nazi, except without the tanks and dive bombers and concentration camps".
It's just alll wrong!
"their" = "They're"
dammit