[Technical Editor]

I don’t think lay opinion matters here. Conduct an experiment on this text and seek opinions from working legal scholars. Whoever wrote this did not have an editor copyedit it — as an editor myself, I am sure of that. So I’m not particularly impressed with the writing itself, and I’ve seen a lot of legal writing.

[ml/nj]

You know what, I'm not very impressed with your writing. You don't think lay opinion matters but I should conduct an "experiment." Do you even know what the word experiment means? (Hint: You don't conduct them by seeking opinions.) Some editor! LOL!

ML/NJ